Commentary:

Shalonda, 08 Nov 2007 10:50 pm

This page didn't really turn out how I wanted it but it does kind of get the job that I wanted done, well done. I have to work tomorrow so hopefully I can have two page done by then. If I get more done then that would be great. Okay now notes about this page.
Well this is a new character. You guys won't learn her name until later but as you can see she is Brad's new girlfriend. I don't plan on showing brad face till later. Why? well they do it in other comics and it drives me crazy so I'll go ahead and do it as well XD *Yeah it doesn't make much sense but oh well :3*

Discussion:

rubia_flame, 08 Nov 2007 11:01 pm

^^ Awsome job, as always, aanndd ttthhheee ffaacceee.. wwhyyyy xD *dies* I will survive somehow.

Can't wait to see what happens next! 8D

Kokkoii-Matoku, 08 Nov 2007 11:16 pm

HA.
You Stupid girl.
He doesn't love you.
See how he sad it without any emontion?
He played you.
-Nods-
I bet he still wants Anira >>; Abusive son of a bitch.
WELL you can't have her ;3!
She's to awsome for you
and i know why authors/Manga-Ka/ Do that, it's because, for a more drama effect.
^w^

Shalonda, 08 Nov 2007 11:38 pm

HAHAHA Kokkoii you are too funny!! Rubia I'm sorry for killing you with the showing-no-face-thing *tries to revive with cookie* Well I'm sure you guys will enjoy the next pages :D It makes me sooooo happy to see you guys like it!!

RagTag Studios, 08 Nov 2007 11:40 pm

Niiice. Hey, just wanted to say I like your comic so far. There are too few comics that deal with the harsh realities in life without making them seem....inconsequential....as a lot of comics tend to. So far you've done a very good job of conveying strength and power of will in Anira. Props!

Hope to see more soon.

Shalonda, 08 Nov 2007 11:57 pm

RagTag thank you VERY much! I'm happy to see that Anira is coming off as a strong willed person. For some reason that just makes me very proud and happy to know this :D I try not to dip into things that I really don't know about. When it comes to domestic violence that I am some what familiar with but I don't want to go over board with the topic. My mind can only take so much and I still have to consider my audience. I'm a moderate type of girl :D You guys all rock thank you soooooo much for your support!!

Teron, 10 Nov 2007 11:12 am

Ho hum, a manga comprised primarily of black people? Instant classic.

Shalonda, 10 Nov 2007 12:21 pm

IF they can have manga's with out any black people then I'm sure enough going to make a manga with mostly black people. Don't worry I'm still going to have different ethnic groups in it as well. I like the challenge of being able to draw other races XD It makes comic making a little more interesting for me.

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