Commentary:

Shalonda, 02 Nov 2007 08:19 pm

sorry for it looking kind of sloppy you guys. I wanted to at least get another page up before I had to get ready for work. okay now time for some notes about this page...well I do have her siblings based off of my cousin and sense I just love there names I just kept them the same. Don't be fooled by the little girls innocent and weak apperance. It's kind of strange because I had each one of them saying something different in the script but when I went to put it in the comic I ended up changing it and now Anira seems more like a mom...what do you guys think? Even though she is there big sister she kind of acts like there mom. oh well hang in there Anira lol

Discussion:

kingv, 02 Nov 2007 08:44 pm

Nice story and comic so far. ^_^

Shalonda, 02 Nov 2007 09:04 pm

Awww :3 Thank you Kingv! I happy to see you put that * seeing how I can't hear you say that I put see you put that but maybe I should have put see you type that or read you put that.....nevermind*

rubia_flame, 03 Nov 2007 12:45 am

ha! xD I know the feeling... *works with little kids* always blaming eachother when they do something bad. ^^
Awsome job! Can't wait to see mooorrree...

Kokkoii-Matoku, 03 Nov 2007 07:27 am

HO SNAP. you got a new fan.
I love your style of artwork ^w^!!

It's a good change around here.

IM LOVING THE STORY! n__n
And yeah your right, she sorta acts like a mixed like a mother and a best friend. Moms can do that -Giggles-

Shalonda, 03 Nov 2007 03:34 pm

hahaha Thanks Rubia Flame and Kokkoii-matoku! She is actually there big sister so I guess I should start drawing her in more big sister roles...oh well XD I'm so happy you guys like the story!! This is kind of my first good try at coming up with a some what simple shojo comic. I shall keep on with more update! *fighting spirit!!*

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