30 Oct 2007 06:39 pm
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USERS
26 Mar 2008 09:05 pm
that's a shock because also in the Fred Hammond song"My heart Depends on you." There is a line like that as well :D Thank you for pointing that out.

Elastikid
26 Mar 2008 06:31 pm
I need you
A line from the song "I Need You" by the band America reads:
"Like the flower needs the rain, you know I need you"
You might want to edit that line out of your poem or change it.
That way you won't look like you're copying.
Otherwise it's a great poem!