Elastikid

26 Mar 2008 06:31 pm

I need you

A line from the song "I Need You" by the band America reads:

"Like the flower needs the rain, you know I need you"

You might want to edit that line out of your poem or change it.
That way you won't look like you're copying.

Otherwise it's a great poem!

Shalonda

26 Mar 2008 09:05 pm

that's a shock because also in the Fred Hammond song"My heart Depends on you." There is a line like that as well :D Thank you for pointing that out.